Three days in a week

4 thoughts on “Three days in a week”

    1. 🙂 of course- n it’s not an insult- just some healthy precautionary measures.
      N next time, my piece is going to be about the Taj incident 🙂 🙂

  1. The story is touching but your language seems to have lost the effortless fiuency and fiow you had during your school days. Make it poignant by economising on your use of words!!!!!:)

  2. Nice story. Could’ve been written better, though. Kinda descriptive and while it works in most parts; in some, it just seems like you’re trying a bit too hard. That’s just what I took from it. Keep writing and good luck to you.

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